Muri iri somo nateguye, ntabwo ngamije kunenga abavuga ibi muri izi ndimi, ahubwo ndagira ngo hatazagira ubura inyito y'ibintu mu Kinyarwanda kandi ari rwo rurimi yumvaga yisanzuramo kandi yifuza gucengera. Ibyo ngaragaza bishingiye ku bushakshatsi nakoze mu bitabo nasomye, ubunararibonye bw'imyaka 5 mu kwigisha ubuhanzi, imenyerezamwuga nakoreye mu Nteko Nyarwanda y'Ururimi n'Umuco mu gihe cy'amezi atandatu, amasomo nize haba mu kiciro cya kabiri cy'amashuri yisumbuye mu ishami ry'indimi n'ubuvanganzo ndetse no mu mashuri makuru mu ishami ry'ubuvanganzo. Hari kandi aho nifashishije zimwe mu mbuga za murandasi z'ibigo by'uburezi bitandukanye; maze ngerageza kubihuriza hamwe mu Kinyarwanda.
Aha ngaha ndibanda ku bwanditsi bw'inkuru, imivugo n'indirimbo gusa.
Si ge wahera….
- Umwinjizo (introduction)
- Igihimba (body)
- Umusozo/Umwanzuro (conclusion)
- Intego/insanganyamatsiko (Theme)
- Urujyano (Plot)
- Imyubakire y’inkuru (Story structure)
- Abakinankuru (Characters)
- Itûurê (Setting)
- Injyana (Style and tone)
- Umusozo (Resolution/denouement/ending)
- Mahamê (Antagonist): Ni umukinankuru ubangamira abandi bakinankuru, utababera mwiza na mba, cyanecyane umukinankuru mukuru.
- Umwîirorê(Protagonist): Ni umukinankuru w’imico myiza, usanga ari we nzirakarengane, uharanira uburenganzira bwe,…Aba ari mico myiza mu nkuru.
- Marorê (Stock character): Ni umukinankuru uba uzwi n’abasomyi bose akenshi kubera ibintu bimeze nk’ibitangaje bimugaragaho.
- Inaâmbe (Static character): Umukinankuru utigera ahinduka cyangwa ngo ahindure uruhande mu nkuru yose.
- Umwuûmvu (Round character): Ni umukinankuru ukomeye ugaragarwaho n’ibintu bitandukanye rimwe na rimwe ugasanga yivuguruza. Agenda ahinduka bitewe n’ikibaye mu nkuru arimo.
- Mabîriko (Foil character): Ni umukinankuru uba afite imyitwarire imwerekana ko ari mwiza (mico myiza) nubwo yaba atagaragara nk’uwaba mwiza cyangwa se akaba ari mubi kandi afite ibintu bimwerekana nk’aho ari mwiza.
- Umumeezi (Flat character): Ni umukinankuru wiyerekana gusa mu isura imwe cyangwa ebyiri mu nkuru yose ubundi ntibihinduke.
- Munyegê (Dynamic character): Ni umukinankuru uhinduka (uhindura imimerere) mu nkuru maze imihindukire ye ntiyongere guhanguka. Hari n’abamwita umukinankuru ukura.
Umwanditsi bitewe n'inkuru yanditse aba afite uko irangira cyangwa uko yifuza ko irangira. Imisozo y'inkuru rero iri ukwinshi nk'uko twabonye ko n'abakinankuru batandukana bitewe n'umwanditsi cyangwa umuhumbyi w'inkuru:
- Umusozo ufunze (Explicit ending)– Uyu ni umusozo wanzura ku bintu byose ndetse ugasubiza n’ibibazo byose by’ingenzi byagaragaye mu nkuru. Muri uyu musozo hashobora kugaragramo ibintu biba kuri buri mukinankuru w’ibanze kandi ahanini uba utanga amakuru ahagije ku buryo umusomyi nta yandi agirira inyota. Ukunda gukoreshwa mu nkuru ndende. Mu kuwukoresha rro umwanditsi agomba kwita ku bibazo yagiye arereka mu kubaka inkuru ye.
- Umusozo w’amiyumve (Implicit ending) – Uyu ni umusozo ushingiye ku mbonê n’amiyumvo by’umwanditsi cyangwa umubarankuru. Ibi bikunda kuboneka mu nkuru ngufi cyane.
- Umusozo mbusane (Twist ending) – Ni umusozo uza mu buryo butandukanye n’ubwo umusomyi yari yiteze. Akenshi utakurikiye neza ashobora kwibwira ko umwanditsi yamuyobeje maze akazana andi makuru yari ahishe ku buryo byabyara impaka cyangwa bigature muri koma abakinankuru bari bakurikiye umukinankuru w’ibanze.
- Umusozo mpiîngaane (Tie-back ending) – NI umusozo uza wibanda ku kibazo cyangwa impungenge umukinankuru yagize mu mizo ya mbere mu mwinjizo. Ni ahantu usanga inkuru itangira yerekana ikibazo cy’umukinankuru igasoza yerekana impamvu icyo kibazo cyabayeho.
- Umusozo mbaza (Unresolved ending) – Ni umusozo udatanga umwanzuro ahubwo umwanditsi agasigira umusozmyi umukoro wo kwibaza icyagakurikiyeho. Ni uburyo bwo guha umusomyi gutekereza ibisubizo bitandukanye byatangwa ku kibazo cyagaragaye mu nkuru yose.
- Umusozo w’indorê ya kure (Long view ending) – Uyu ni umusozo uvuga uko mu gihe cyakurikiyeho/kizaza byaje kugendekera umukinankuru mukuru.
- Interuro (umwinjizo cyangwa intangiriro mu nkuru).usibye inyito zihinduka kandi usanga uburyo abahanzi baterura imivugo atari kimwe no mu nkuru. Mu mivugo umuhanzi ashobora gutangirana ikivugo, gutaka inganzo ye, gutaka umunsi, ....bitewe nuko yabiteguye.
- Abakinankuru badahita bigaragaza nk'uko mu nkuru umusomyi wese ahita abasha no kubona amasano yabo ndetse akenshi n'amazina.
- Interuro ngufi kandi zirashe: Interuro zo mu mivugo ziba zirasa ku ntego kandi zigakunda kugaragaramo inshinga z'ibikorwa cyane.
- Ikeshamvugo ryiganje: Mu ikeshamvugo aha bishatse kuvuga ko abasizi cyangwa abahimbyi b'imivugo bakunze gukoresha imvugo ihanitse, ari na ho bakoresha isubirajwi, imibangikanyo n'isubirajambo ndetse n'imizimizo itandukanye (iyitirira, ihwanisha, ikabya, ininura, imibangikanyo, isangizamusozo, iyunguruza, igaruracyungo,....)
- Itondeke ripimye. Gusa ibi ntabwo bigikunze kwitabwaho mu mivugo y'iki gihe ku buryo buhita bwumvikana. Ariko ni ubuhanga butandukanya imivugo n'izindi nkuru zisanzwe. Ubu buhanga bugaragara cyane nko mu mazina y'inka, ibihozo n'ibisingizo.
- Injyana y'ibitekerezo: Mu mivugo ntabwo ibitekerezo cyangwa ibikorwa bigenda bihana nk'uko mu nkuru zindi bigenda ahubwo umusizi yita ku buryo ari bubikurikiranye mu buryo buryoheye ugutwi kandi abantu bakaba babizirikana mu buryo buboroheye. Hari n'aho usanga anyuzamo akavuga imbamutima ze bwite ku gitekerezo runaka amaze kurasaho, ugasanga ntaho bihuriye ariko nyamara ubisoma we cyangwa ubyumva akarushaho kwizihirw n'icyo gihangano. Ikindi nuko umusizi ashobora gushyiramo ibitekerezo bidafite indi ntego usibye kuryoshya igihangano gusa.
- Umusayuko (umusozo mu nkuru): Mu busizi ntabwo umusozo uba wubatse nk'uwo mu nkuru zindi. Mu busizi nyarwanda akenshi ukunda gusanga imivugo cyangwa ibisigo bisozwa n'ikidogo cy'umusizi cyangwa akaba avuga amagambo asa n'avunyisha ku yindi sango. Mbese mu yandi magambo ugasanga umusizi hari ikintu runaka ari gusaba abo yabwiraga nubwo hari n'ahandi usanga asoza agaragaza uko we abona ibintu cyangwa uko byaje kurangira muri make.
- Imikoreshereze y'ururimi: Mu mivugo usanga akenshi ikibonezamvugo kidahabwa umwanya usumbye uwo gutambutsa igitekerezo nyamukuru. Uburyo amagambo aba atondetse ntabwo iteka buba bwubahiriza amategeko y'ikibonezamvugo nk'uko mu nkuru biba ari itegeko. Ikindi kandi mu mivugo habaho gutoranya amagambo agiye yihariye kandi afite ibisobanuro binini kurusha uburyo amagambo atoranywa mu nkuru.
Mu kwiga indirimbo n’ubuhimbyi bwazo, hari ibintu by’ibanze bikunze kugaruka biranga indirimbo nziza ndetse urebye binakurikizwa ahantu hose ku isi. Nk’uko n’abandi benshi babigenza, mbona ko indirimbo yabaye nziza ngendeye ku kuntu ikunzwe na benshi kurenza ibindi nubwo atari cyo kintu wagenderaho gusa. Ibi tubaye nk’ababyirengagiza, reka turebere hamwe ibiraga indirimbo mu iki gihe cy’umuziki ugezweho. Gusa ingingo ndagaragaza ntabwo zitondetse mu rukurikirane ntubyibeshyeho. Ikindi nuko hari nubwo indirimbo yose itaba ifite ibi bitewe n’injyana ikozemo, ubushake bw’umuhimbyi cyangwa se indi mpamvu.
1. Ijwi – Ni urusaku rutunganye kandi runogeye ugutwi uririmba cyangwa ugacuranga. Amajwi meza agomba kuba ari asigara mu mutwe w’uyumva ndetse akaba anyororotse ari na cyo ahanini usanga uwakunze indirimbo asigarana.
2. Urujyano rw’amajwi cyangwa incurango- Ibi ni ibirungo biherekeza ijwi mu ndirimbo, ugasanga ari kimwe mu bigize injyana bikaba ari uburyo amanita agiye akurikiranyemo haba mu ncurango cyangwa imiririmbire y’umuhimbyi.
3. Ingoma/umudiho – Umudiho w’indirimbo ni wo ufasha umwumvyi kuryoherwa n’indirimbo akaba yanabyina waba witonze cyangwa wihuta. Rimwe na rimwe hari ubwo bamwe babifata nk’umuvuduko w’indirimbo; akenshi kuko burya umuziki ugenga amiyumvo ya muntu ugasanga akenshi umudiho w’indirimbo ari wo ukurura umuntu bwa mbere. Umudiho kandi cyangwa ingoma ni ka kanyuzo gatangwa n’ibcurangisho binyuranye birimo ingoma, gitari y’ijwi ryo hasi, gitari y’amajwi ageze ndetse n’inanga.
4. Injyana – ni akandi kanyuzo gatangwa n’ingoma n’umudiho cyangwa urujyano rwabyo byose biherekejwe n’amajwi. Injyana ishobora guhinduka iyo hinjijwemo amagambo cyangwa hongewemo ikindi gicurangisho bigahita biba indi njyana. Hariho amoko atandukanye y’injyana z’indirimbo nubwo atari cyo nibanzeho muri iyi nyandiko: Rock, Ikibaanda, Hip Hop, R&B, Ikinimba, Igishakamba, Rumba, Reggae, Soul, Jazz, n’izindi.
5. Inkuru cyangwa intêgo – Indirimbo zose zigira inkuru cyangwa insanganyamatsiko. Cyanecyane izina ry’indirimbo rihita rigaragaza mu buryo buziguye icyo indirimbo igiye kwibandaho ndetse n’igitekerezo yubakiyeho kikagenda gisobanuka ugendeye ku izina yahawe. Ibi ni ibintu by’ingirakamaro cyane kuko abahimbyi benshi badakunze koroherwa no gukora amazina meza y’indirimbo cyangwa se n’inkuru zizirimo ugasanga si inkuru ifite itangiriro n’iherezo bigatuma uwumva indirimbo atayitaho. Nubwo hari abantu benshi bakunda ibindi bice mu ndirimbo ugasanga inkuru ntacyo zibabwiye, umuhimbyi we ntagomba kugendera muri uwo mwijima kuko hari abandi bakurikirana cyane inkuru kurusha ibindi birungo yashyiramo kandi ugasanga akenshi ari ba bandi b’abahanga muri muzika.
6. Akiîmbo- Ni ka kantu kaba mu ndirimbo kagutwara umutima ukumva wagakunze n’iyo indirimbo waba uyanga urunuka akenshi ukajya wisanga niba uri nko mu nzira urakaririmbye bucece mu mutima. Aka kimbo gashobora kuba ijambo rimwe, interuro cyangwa se ukanasanga ari nk’incurango yateretswe ahantu runaka hagati mu ndirimbo.
7. Amagambo – Ya nkuru twavuze haruguru iboneka bitewe n’uburyo umuhimbyi yagiye atondekanya amagambo cyangwa se akanakina na yo. Amagambo ni yo arasa ku ntego cyangwa insanganyamatsiko y’indirimbo. Akenshi uzasanga amagambo aba afite ukuntu atondetse mu buryo nab wo bunogeye ijisho cyangwa se no kuyasoma ubwayo bikagira injyana n’iyo waba utaririmba. Iki ni igice cyo kwitondera cyane kuko amagambo ntagoma guhushanya n’injyana ndetse n’umudiho. Gusa hari n’indirimbo zitagira amagambo ugasanga zigizwe n’incurango nsa.
8. Ibitero by’indirimbo – Indirimbo ziba zigabanyijemo ibice kandi bikagira uko byitwa. Hari umwinjizo, igitero, inyikirizo/impakanizi, umwiitso n’incuriko. Ubundi igitero ni cyo gisobanura ingingo zigize ya ntego cyangwa akimbo gakunze kuba kari mu mpakanizi/inyikirizo y’indirimbo. Ibindi bice nk’umwinjizo, umwitso, gucurika n’ibindi biza byunganira ibi bindi mu ndirimbo.
9. Inyubako – Ni ishusho y’ibintu bibiri. Icya mbere ni itonde bya bice by’indirimbo bikurikiza nk’uko bikunze kugaragara mu ndirimbo (Umwinjizo-igitero-inyikirizo-ugakomeza) nubwo nta tegeko ryihariye ryo kubishoreranya ariko umuhimbyi agomba kuba afite uburyo byose yabiherekeranyije mu ndirimbo. Icya kabiri, ni ihererekane ry’ibicurangisho, amajwi cyangwa se n’ibindi bintu bigize indirimbo.
10. Indeshyo – Indeshyo y’indirimbo ni igihe imara ivuga bitewe n’aho yagenewe gucurangirwa. Niba ari kuri radiyo, mu iki gihe indirimbo nyinshi zikunze kuba zifite iminota hagati y’itatu n’ine. Gusa hari izishobora kujya munsi cyangwa hejuru ariko uku ni ko mu iki gihe zikunze kuba zingana. Rero ushobora kuzasanga indirimbo zubatse izina zifite bike muri ibi birango cyangwa zibifite byose. Ntibizagutere kwibaza byinshi ahubwo uge uhita ku kwita ku iryo tandukaniro ritanga ibyiza buri gihe. Indirimbo itabyujuje si uko iba ari mbi ahubwo umuhimbyi wayo ni we uba afite impamvu yakoresheje iyi ngingo ntakoreshe iriya.
11. Imbe- Ni bwa buhanga indirimbo yigiramo bwo gukurura uyumva bakomatana. Niba ari indirimbo ivuga ku gahinda koko ugasanga uyumva yaguye mu gahinda atabizi cyangwa yaba ari iy’umunezero umuntu na we akumva aranezerewe nta mpamvu anezerewe. Ibi akenshi n’umuhimbyi ntabwo abigiramo uruhare runini keretse akenshi iyo ari indirimbo ishingiye ku nkuru mpamo kandi bikaba ari ibintu bisobanukira cyane abumva iyo ndirimbo. Urugero : indirimbo ivuga ubusharire bwa Jenoside yakorewe abatutsi mu Rwanda, Umunyarwanda cyanecyane uwabonye Jenoside iyo ndirimbo ishobora kumusubiza mu ibyo bihe kandi nta ngufu abishyizemo habe na mba.
12. Inyota : Ni ubushake indirimbo itera umuntu uyumva ahanini bitewe n’ubusosere bw’incurango ariko ahanini ari ukubera amagambo yakoreshejwe. Urugero : Hari indirimbo iba ivuga ku bukwe ugasanga uyumvise wese ahise yifuza gukora ubukwe cyangwa yaba ari iy’urukundo ugasanga buri wese uyumvise yifuje gukundana ndetse akenshi akanabikora. Si rimwe si kabiri twumvise cyangwa tubonye abantu bakundanye kubera indirimbo bumvanye.
Niba uri umwanditsi w’indirimbo ushaka kwandika ukurikije umurongo nyawo, inama nakugira ni iyo gushakisha indirimbo z’injyana ukunda kurusha izindi maze ukazijora ureba uburyo zubatse maze ugatangira kujya uzigenderaho mu kubaka ibyawe. Ibi ntaho bihuriye no gukopera ngo ushishure izo ndirimbo nge ndavuga kureba ishusho gusa. Ikindi nubyitaho uzasanga indirimbo hafi ya zose zikomeye kandi zakunzwe ziba ari izujuje ibi bintu twavuze haruguru. Ibi ndizera ko bizagufasha gukomeza ubushakashatsi bwawe mu rugendo rw’ubwanditsi bw’indirimbo.
Ikitonderwa: Ibi navuze haruguru ntabwo ari byo kampara kuko nk’uko n’imico itandukana, ubwanditsi nab wo buratandukana ugasanga hari indirimbo zitajya zibyuzuza cyangwa ugasanga hari izibyuzuza buri gihe ndetse hakaba n’izindi zigira n’ibyo ntagaragaje hano. Ibi ni ibizwi ku rwego mpuzamahanga ubasha kubona mu ndirimbo z’injyana zose aho ziva zikagera.
2. Reggae
3. R&B
4. Blues
5. Soul
6. Rap
7. Salsa
8. Jazz
9. Jazz Funk
10. Jazz Fusion
11. Rock
12. Rock and Roll
13. Hip Hop
14. Ikibanda (country)
15. Kwela
16. Funk
17. Serenade
18. Ska
19. Techno
20. Dance
21. Skiffle
22. UK Garage
23. Tone poem
24. Ikinimba
25. Taarabu
26. Rumba
27. Igishakamba
28. Ikinyemera
29. Zouk
30. Soukous
1. Ref: Berry C (1973) Voice and the Actor London: Harrap
2. Biko, Steve. I write what I like. London, Heinermann: 1987
3. Oral and writing skills, Ayieta, Emily Ondondo
4. Music in Theory and practice, Bruce Benward
5. Understanding music, Jeremy Yudkin
6. Inganzo y’Ubwanditsi, Module, GASIMBA F.X
7. Inkoranyamagambo y’Ikinyarwanda mu Kinyarwanda, 2004
1. http://www.songwriting.net
2. https://dramaresource.com/storytelling/
3. http://www.writersdigest.com
4. http://edynamiclearning.com/courses/high-school-creative-writing/
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